Some photos of my friend

[overcast]

Here are some phtots that I shoot for my friend, hope your feedback~

[jbag1489]

the last image looks VERY washed out to me, especially next to the others.

i also think how much she is tilting head in first two looks strange

[Gil P]

These are just happy snaps... but this girl needs to be shot more. What a facial structure!

[ChiefHendo]

These are just happy snaps... but this girl needs to be shot more. What a facial structure!

+1

Compose and direct her - that head tilt in two probably happened naturally, but...frankly is not appealing.

[el_hoppy]

I don't mind the head tilt so much in the second, I don't like.

In photo 1 the blown out sky is too much of a distraction, so maybe it would be better to have shot from higher and fill the background with more train.

2 & 3 The chairs and stuff are nothing more than a distraction and cropping to portrait would be better

4 to washed out. Perhaps lowering the exposure and adding contrast in editing would make it more appealing

Your friend is stunning and your should shoot and shoot until you get perfect shots of her

[hansomelly]

You managed to hit the nail right on the head and explained out everything without complication. Maybe, people can take a signal.

[Masheiry]

Upset, I can not find the picture.